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Before I Met You... by =neatpit:iconneatpit:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open


Before I met you…
Love was just a word,
an idea inside my head.

Before I met you…
Loneliness threatened me
With a solitary future.

Before I met you…
Finding the girl of my dreams
Seemed seriously daunting.

The day I met you…
I could hardly believe
You weren’t just a figment.
I was ensnared by your beauty
And drawn to your scent.
Your kiss opened my eyes
And now I can fly.

Now that I’m with you…
Love is my favorite chore
And I’ll never get bored.

Now that I’m with you…
Loneliness no longer exists
And I know I’ll never be alone.

Now that I’m with you…
The searching is over,
I’ve found the girl of my dreams.
©2009 =neatpit
:iconneatpit:

Author's Comments

My girlfriend makes poetry flow out of my mind so easily. :heart:

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:icontokiyaensui:
=tokiyaensui Apr 23, 2009, 2:13:16 PM
yeah, girlfriends'll do that to ya

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"My life is flashing before my eyes. Wait a minute...I don't remember her."
:icon50calwolf:
~50calWolf Apr 23, 2009, 2:22:35 PM
lucky you

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"When life gives you lemons, make orange juice and leave the world wondering how the hell you did it"
:iconranafroggie:
*Ranafroggie Apr 23, 2009, 5:29:27 PM
:blushes: *starry eyed*

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"Hug a n00b. They're soft and cuddly"

*DarkDaughtersAndSons
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*BlackScythePack
:iconneatpit:
=neatpit Apr 23, 2009, 5:35:29 PM
*Squee*

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Check out this AWESOME club!!! *DarkDaughtersAndSons
:iconneatpit:
=neatpit Apr 23, 2009, 5:35:33 PM
:D

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Check out this AWESOME club!!! *DarkDaughtersAndSons
:iconneatpit:
=neatpit Apr 23, 2009, 5:35:40 PM
xD

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Check out this AWESOME club!!! *DarkDaughtersAndSons
:iconalaizeah:
~Alaizeah Apr 23, 2009, 5:44:42 PM
you and your skills :)
yet another beautiful verse.
it deserves a wink!
;)
hahahahaha

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there has always been a LIGHT in the darkness, though the darkness has never understood it...
:iconneatpit:
=neatpit Apr 23, 2009, 5:49:20 PM
That's... cruel.

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Check out this AWESOME club!!! *DarkDaughtersAndSons
:iconalaizeah:
~Alaizeah Apr 23, 2009, 5:50:32 PM
you know you like it!!!!!
mu-hu-hahahahahaha

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there has always been a LIGHT in the darkness, though the darkness has never understood it...
:iconthe-syndicatalyst:
~The-Syndicatalyst Apr 23, 2009, 6:18:18 PM
Women will do that at all stages...
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